Library Entry # 634
Marshall’s Law Dateline – Continuously re-arranging serious words can become boring. Reader can test their painting with words like artists use colors skills. How by inserting title plus finishing last half of following visual prose without music writing exercise.
Title (insert by reader)
Players: Old Man (OM) and Boy (Boy)
Story concept old man sharing some of his life experiences lessons with young boy.
Act I
OM – Hello boy, why are you bothering this old man during an increasingly beautiful cloudless sunset?
Boy – I sense storm clouds rumbling on my America’s horizon.
OM – I know waiting for inevitable sorrows is always hardest part.
Boy – Can’t my America’s approaching storm be stopped?
OM – Not likely, how do you talk evil that are ignorant of their being evil; into changing their evil ways and becoming virtuous?
Boy – Sounds like my America’s future is hopeless.
OM – No sir just another destiny road, leading Americans’ to their own self destructive fate.
Boy – What does that mean?
OM – Never lose your faith, and keep your powder dry; you will always need one and sometimes the other.
Boy - I am listening, keep talking.
(Reader’s assignment: Insert dialogue for remainder of this writing exercise. Prove to yourself that you have not lost your free will to stay free; followed by creating title for this writing exercise.)
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(Last line either OM or Boy's - reader's choice)
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(End reader’s assignment)
Hopefully Editor Marshall will be satisfied that this mid-February story has a happier ending than last year’s “Valentine Love Story” with surprise ending about vampire armadillos feeding to breed around middle of February. Reader can decide on their own by referencing. Texas Drifter: Valentine Love Story | All Right Magazine – Jan. 2013 How, by reciting in randomly arranged words uplifting non-fiction love stories based on real world events …
Since reader can finish dialogue for above story, Texas Drifter being still bored from re-arranging serious words. Still needs passing non-fiction story thought, “No Tears for Valentine” might be partial solution. Writing exercise will strive to have happier ending than vampire armadillos feeding to breed during every February. TRUE not FALSE
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